Professor: Tim Pilgrim,
associate professor
Office: CF 265
Phone: 650-3253
Office hours: MTW 8 a.m.; T 10
a.m.; or by appt.
E-mail: tpilgrim@hope.journ.wwu.edu
Internet home page: http://hope.journ.wwu.edu/tpilgrim
Texts:
"Fearless Editing" (2005, Allyn and Bacon) by
Carolyn Dale and Tim Pilgrim
(Note: This is a text by WWU journalism professors and is less
expensive than any other editing text for print media. All
royalties earned from sale to students in J309 will be donated by
Dale and Pilgrim to the WWU Journalism department's scholarship
fund.)
"When Words Collide: A Media Writer's Guide
to Grammar and Style," (latest edition) by
Lauren Kessler and Duncan McDonald
"The Associated Press Stylebook and Briefing
on Media Law" (latest edition)
Non-required supplemental
texts and readings:
Pegie Stark Adam, "Color, Contrast and Dimension
in News Design" -- Pilgrim has a copy for overnight checkout
"InDesign for Macintosh & Windows," by
Sandee Cohen -- Pilgrim has a copy for overnight checkout
Supplies:
Students need notebook and pencils and an
external hard drive or USB storage device (flash drive) or
reliable external storage on a non-journalism server. Students use
personal Web space WWU provides them (although Pilgrim strongly
urges extra backup on a USB
or firewire storage device).
Available labs: InDesign is available in CF
202 (our classroom open only until 5 p.m.) and in CF 161 and Fine Arts
101, both of which are 24 hour labs and also have Macs with Adobe
CS4). There is also a small Mac lab in the new psychology building
adjacent to CF.
Please use Firefox, Opera or Safari to view this syllabus -- do not use
Internet Explorer.
The class is MAC ONLY -- DO NOT USE PC COMPUTERS FOR THIS CLASS.
Also, do not turn in PDF or files other than InDesign (CS 4) on
Macs in Fine Arts 101, CF 161 or the WWU journalism department
(fonts used must be readable by Pilgrim's Mac).
Note: Pilgrim REQUIRES that student
lab computers (and handsets) are NOT LOGGED ON on during class
lectures and presentations -- ignoring this rule results in embarrassing
confrontations and in attendance/participation point
deductions.
IN ANY E-MAIL TO PILGRIM, STUDENTS SHOULD PUT J309 ON THE SUBJECT
LINE TO ENSURE THAT HE WILL READ THE MESSAGE.
Software:
Thorough knowledge of InDesign (Adobe Creative
Suite 4 for Macintosh) is REQUIRED. Students are required to gain InDesign
expertise by the beginning of the second week. Mandatory workshops
outside of class (at the end of
Week 1) will be arranged with the Student Technology Center early in
the quarter -- students who do not complete this training -- or get
individual training from the STC -- MUST DROP THE
CLASS; after the workshops and throughout the quarter, students may also
obtain supplemental individual help from STC (in
Haggard Hall) to increase proficiency. Also, they may seek help from
online tutorials -- for instance, try these:
http://www.design.iastate.edu/LABS/tutorials/indesign/basic.html
http://www.video-tutes.com/packages/INDesign1.php
Also, other software used in J309 will not be taught,
so students are urged to use the lab hour built into J309 to become
familiar with Photoshop,
Illustrator and Excel (Web-related software such as Dreamweaver will
also benefit WWU journalism graduates) -- and this software, too, has
tutoring and training available at the Student
Technology Center. (In addition, a number of printed
tutorials, such as the Peachpit Press Visual Quickstart
series, is available for InDesign, PhotoShop and Illustrator.
Catalog description:
Prereq: Journalism 207 and 307 or 390. News copy
desk
operations;
editing; headline writing; dummying; page make-up and news graphics; and
computerized editing.
Description:
Journalism 309 is a five-credit
class in which students use InDesign and to a more limited degree,
Illustrator,
Photoshop, Word and Excel. J309 does NOT teach their
use; instead,
it focuses on editing concepts and relies on students to develop the
necessary
software skills to apply those concepts.
The journalism department hopes students enjoy
and learn from the experience to develop "word" editing skills traditionally
needed by editors and the more modern visual, computer-oriented skills
becoming important nowadays. Copy editors at newspapers,
editors at magazines and those in public relations creating publications
need to master many skills to do their jobs.
This course focuses on comprehension, analysis
and evaluation of the concepts of priority,
clarity, community, unity, contrast and beauty as they relate to media
editing -- and also focuses on imparting the following skills:
* editing news stories for content, leads, accuracy
and legality;
* editing for AP news style and journalistic
English;
* writing headlines and deck heads;
* handling wire copy ( including trims, cuts
and updates);
* gaining understanding
of typography;
* cropping and sizing photographs and writing
cutlines;
* exercising legal and ethical judgment;
* creating and editing infographics;
* designing InDesign pages (tabloid, broadsheet,
magazine sizes);
* integrating concepts focused on during the
quarter;
* learning how the concepts can
be applied to newsletters and Web pages;
* incorporating fact checking skills gained by
using Wilson Library resources, the J309 reference sources below, phone
books, maps and
other Web resources such as these:
http://www.m-w.com/ (dictionary)
http://www.yourdictionary.com/
(dictionary/thesaurus)
http://www.encyberpedia.com/cyberlinks/links/index.html
(encyclopedia)
http://www.spl.org/magnewsp/emagloc.html
(Seattle Public
Library)
http://www.americanpressinstitute.org/pages/toolbox/ (American Press Institute)
Student skills:
Most students will feel more comfortable with
some of these tasks than with others. But, editing requires skills in both
areas. Students should expect to spend considerable time on their own in
the lab gaining the skills to complete assignments, especially in
students' weaker
areas. Students will also have the opportunity to capitalize on
their
strengths by selecting near the quarter's end one final graded project
that allows their talent to "shine."
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Grading:
All assignments must be submitted as Macintosh CS3 InDesign
documents (no e-mailed, PDF or other submissions unless
indicated by Pilgrim).
Many class and lab sessions allow students to
learn the important concepts and practice demonstrating their understanding
of the concepts in the editing process. The skills of editing focused upon
are cumulative; successive projects require a deeper and broader conceptual
understanding and ability in application. The course grade
is based on an introductory assignment, four major assignments, two
in-depth journalistic English quizzes,
an infographics
assignment and a four-hour in-class project assigned in Week 9 and
completed in Week 10 (all must be completed) -- along with
attendance/participation points.
The J309 course possible points for grades A to F
is broken down as follows:
Practice stories -- practice only -- no
points.
Stories 2 -- 145 pts.
Basics quiz 1 -- 100 pts.
Stories 3 -- 200 pts.
Basics quiz 2 -- 100 pts.
Page 1 design -- 100 pts.
Infographics -- 25 pts.
Feature design -- 100 pts.
Attendance/participation -- 80 pts.
In-class final project -- 150 pts.
Total possible -- 1,000 pts.
In-class points, including quizzes,
infographics assignment and
attendance/participation points (students lose partial
attendance points if not in class within 5 minutes of starting time)
CANNOT be "made up."
Assignments not turned
in because of "computer" problems will receive
70% of possible
points -- if loss is documented and determined by Pilgrim to be
legitimate (notify him immediately upon having any such problems so
that legitimacy is established).
Also, five points are deducted from any asssignment handed in
after deadline -- and beginning at five minutes
past deadline, the late penalty outlined below applies.
The course has 1,000 possible points.
Points -- not "grades" -- will not be assigned to each project (a
"grade" for the course will be assigned at quarter's end). Out of the
1,000 possible points, the plus and minus system (A, A-, B+ etc.) is used
in awarding those final grades.
In general, however, a total of 90 to 100 percent of the possible points
on a project indicates excellent performance; 80-89 percent, very good
performance; 70-79 percent, average; 60-69 percent,
below average; lower than 60 percent, unacceptable
performance.
The final project value is 15 percent of the possible points for the quarter. At quarter's end, a "loose curve" will be used to determine final course grades. The plus/minus system will be used. Several editing projects will be begun in class and completed in the lab later as part of the homework.
The normal LATE PENALTY is 10 percent per day if
turned in any later than five minutes after the assigned time on day
due (weekends count as one day). In-class exercises
cannot be made up. During class sessions,
students may confer with each other -- except on the two quizzes.
Increased learning
occurs with such collaborative effort. For all graded assignments,
HOWEVER, assignments submitted must be only the student's
own work -- no idential submissions (see the WWU catalog
regarding academic dishonesty). Also, assignments submitted in
the class will be used (without author's name) as examples in
future J309 classes -- and possibly in the class text --
unless students notify Pilgrim in writing they do not agree to
such use.
J309 students take J309 with the understanding that for
educational purposes to further student learning, their work from
class assignments may be shown and used in class discussion.
DUE DATES OF MAJOR GRADED PROJECTS ARE NOTED ON
THE SCHEDULE BELOW. Please note that Pilgrim has a
HEARING
DISABILITY, so student conversations during class should be held in the
hallway
so class learning will not be interrupted. Also, no cell
phones or other computer devices (iPods, etc.) in class -- turn them off
before you enter. Student projects created in this class become part of
the teaching resources of J309 and may be used as examples in future
classes and writings by J309 instructors (student names will be
removed from examples). Also, copyrighted material is used in class
assignments for educational purposes -- students must not reuse any
materials provided (but do keep a copy of assignments for a portfolio).
Finally, no grades are posted in
hallways; begining Thursday noon of finals week, final projects will be
available in CF 251 in a file cabinet drawer for student papers;
please do not e-mail Pilgrim asking for
grades -- but do feel free to e-mail him during finals week at the time
the final exam is scheduled for an e-mail conference on
your final project.
Similarly, students missing quizzes or in-class point opportunities
because of swine flu may take a makeup
quiz or make up the work. They should see Pilgrim when they are well (&
bring their note).
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J309 schedule -- Fall 2009:
Readings below are from "Fearless Editing"
(FE),
"The Associated Press Stylebook and Libel Manual"
(AP) and "When Words Collide" (WWC).
Complete all readings by the beginning of the week.
WEEK 0 & WEEK 1 (Sept. 23, 28, 30) Introduction and Ch. 1, 2, 3 and 12 in FE; read Ch. 1, 2 and 3 in WWC: review entire AP stylebook; begin Practice stories; COMPLETE Indesign training session before Week 2
WEEK 2 (Oct. 5 & 7) Continue
AP, journalistic English, InDesign work; work on headlines and editing;
complete Stories 1; assign Stories 2. Read Ch. 4-5 (and reread Ch. 1-3
and 12) in FE; read Ch. 4-7 in WWC
Due: Practice stories completed by end of
Mon., Oct. 5
WEEK 3 (Oct. 12 & 14)
Continue AP style, journalistic English, headlines; expand editing;
work on Stories 2 in and out of class; take Basics Quiz 1; reread
Ch. 4, 5 & 12 in FE, and reread Ch. 1-7 in WWC; review entire AP;
begin libel and ethics; assign Stories 3
Due: Basics Quiz 1 (100 pts.)
given at beginning of class Wed., Oct. 14
Due: Stories 2 (145 pts.) printed on
InDesign page at 11:15 a.m., Wed., Oct. 14
WEEK 4 (Oct. 19 & 21) Continue with AP style, journalistic English; begin more complex editing; work on Stories 3; read Ch. 7 (photos) in FE; read Ch. 8 in WWC
WEEK 5 (Oct. 26 & 28) Continue complex
story editing; conclude journalistic English review; conclude Stories
3; begin editing photos; assign Page 1 layout; complete Stories 3; read
Ch. 6 and Ch. 11 (layout/design) in FE; read Ch. 9 and 10 in WWC
Due: Stories 3 (200 pts.), each story printed on its own
separate InDesign page -- due at 11 a.m., Mon., Oct. 26.
WEEK 6 (Nov. 2 & 4) Continue Page 1 layout;
review Ch. 1-8 in WWC and especially Ch. 8 in FE; reread Ch. 6
and 11 in FE
Due: In-class journalistic English basics
Quiz 2 (100 pts.) -- at beginning of class Mon., Nov. 2
WEEK 7 (Nov. 9 & 11 -- no class Nov. 11,
Veterans Day) Page 1 work; layout; color
theory lecture and analysis; read Ch. 10 (infographics) in FE;
read Ch. 11 and 12 in WWC; read (optional) Pegie Stark Adam's "Color,
Contrast, and Dimension in News Design" (on reserve in Wilson
Library); IN-CLASS EXCEL TRAINING AT 11:30 a.m., Mon., Nov. 9
Due: Page 1 design (100 pts.) in
electronic form placed in
Editpro folder and submitted in reduced-size b&w version printed on
InDesign page at 11 a.m., Mon., Nov. 9
WEEK 8 (Nov. 16 & 18) Complete in-class
infographics assignment; assign feature page
layout; expand visual approaches to content;
read Ch. 9 (typography) in FE; typography lecture
Due: Weak infographic (& typed
reason articulating reasons why) at beginning of class Mon., Nov. 16 (5
pts.); also due, one student-created infographic (20 pts.) completed in
class Mon., Nov. 16 (entire class period devoted to producing
infographic)
WEEK 9 (Nov. 23 & 25 -- university closes at
noon for Thanksgiving holiday)
Integrating writing, editing and design; feature page layout due; final
project assigned on Mon., Nov 23
Due: Broadsheet feature page design (100
pts.) in Editpro folder and in reduced-size b&w version printed in InDesign
on Wed., Nov. 25 at 11 a.m.
WEEK 10 (Nov. 30 & Dec. 2)
Dead week. Work in class both Monday and Wednesday on final design
projects; course evaluation
Due: Rough draft of final project at end of class (in reduced
size -- use 47% -- on 8.5 x 11
printed sheet) on Mon., Nov. 30 -- ROUGH DRAFT MUST BE SUBMITTED IN
ORDER TO COMPLETE THE PROJECT
Due: Final in-class project due at end of class (InDesign project
submitted to Editpro as required) on Wed., Dec. 2
Week 11 (Dec. 8-12 -- Finals Week)
Pilgrim will be available during the final exam time via e-mail to
students for conferences about the final project --
but no office hours. Pick up final in-class projects beginning
Thurs., Dec. 10 in the filing cabinet in CF 251.
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Created September 2009; updated Sept. 30, 2009